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psyburn21

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Wow, it has been awhile since I posted a journal entry hasn't it.  That's just me being extremely lazy and now I'm extremely bored seeing as how I have no job.  

As it stands now, I'm trying to decide what story to work on.  I can say without a doubt that I have too many story ideas.  The one that has gotten the most praise has been "To Awake and Avenge the Dead", but has it stands I haven't figured out the storyline for it yet.  As always, I'd appreciate any feedback and ideas for the story or any other story I've posted here.  Hopefully I'll get something done soon and post it here and across the internet so it can own it like it does everything else.
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I'm back

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Sorry for the long periood between updates, but I've been really busy the last two months.  Between two jobs and lots of gaming (got a Wii), I haven't been writing anything.  I cut my part job the end of May and I'm starting back writing between the long sessions of Ragnarok Online and Super Smash Brothers Brawl.  The new main character is named Meilin Raye Karasuyama, a demon hunter.  That's all I got on her so far, but you'll find out more in the coming weeks
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Hey guys,

Damn my short attention span, in the span of a month I went from working on that time travel story to a demon hunter story.  Not that I've had much time to write anything lately.  I work two jobs, commute near two hours a day, been playing Super Smash Brothers Brawl, and last night my house got hit by a tornado (I'm fine and so is my family btw).   I can safely say that I've had a busy month since I last posted an entry.  Hopefully I'll have more free time starting next week to write more, as soon as I get the roof fixed and the pine tree of my other car, lol.

I'll post a rough idea of what I'll be doing with this demon hunter story, but the main thing is that its suppose to be a comedy (a first for me).  May be I'll keep my attention on this enough to actually do something as far as writing is concerned with it.
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Hey,

As I continue my attempt to write this new story, its seems as I've been slowed a little by my regular work, lack of usable ideas,  and by my own laziness on some days.  This is has some delayed me in writing the first chapter of the "Time Jumpers" story.  So I took a break from it all to get inspired again.  Reading, watching, and playing new stuff really does help.

While I've been on my break, I have added some ideas to several story ideas I'd been working on in last year.  I'm not gonna give too much away here, but you all may just see To Awake & Avenge the Dead expand by a few pages (those that have read it and talked to me about it are waiting for more as always).

As for "Time Jumpers", I've been getting more together in that storyline.  Most of the development has been with Kou and Yume who's personalitys have expanded a great deal, especially considering what initially inspired Yume.  

That's all I got for right now, but I'll try and post again once I'm close to releasing something new or I'm updating the current featured deviation.

Thanks

psyburn21
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Hi guys, this is my first journal entry so please bare with me.  

As all you that know me, I have this tendency to produce a lot of ideas and write many different openings for stories but I never finish the actual story.  Well, here comes my latest failed attempt at trying to complete a new story.  My goal is to try and spit out a chapter every two weeks or at the longest once a month.  Hopefully I'll be able to complete a light novel or novel length story here.  I really would like comments and feedback on this story.  Who knows, may be you'll even give me an idea or two use in the story.

Here's the new story idea.  At least, the very basic premise.  

Kou stumbles across an old parchment that shows him how to make an artifact that allows for time travel. Before he's to test it, Yume comes in a drunken stupor and sets off a chain reaction that sends them back in time. It also unlocks latent powers in the couple (Kou has chi-based powers that become active when using a sword and Yume has very powerful wind-based powers).

There's way more to it than that, but that you'll find out later when I actually write the story.  As the story progresses, I'll release bits of development info on the story and characters in future journal updates.

Thanks for reading,

psyburn21
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